Friday, January 23, 2009

I sigh

Drowning in a sea of thoughts
Waves crashing
One against another
And new ones forming
Rushing towards my conscious mind

I struggle to resurface
To thrust my head
Through the crashing thoughts
I gasp for breath
I sigh

My friends tease me about the number of times i sigh. I quite didn't know how to explain why i sighed so much. And i didn't intend to write this thing as an explanation. I sat sighing this morning and this is what came out of it. :-)

18 comments:

--xh-- said...

nice :)
"Drowning in ... conscious mind" well, it describes my state now :|

Vadapoche said...

: ), when i look at my last post, i think it could have been written by you.

Julie Kibler said...

Very nice, Bungi. Ah, the "curse" of being a thinker. :-)

SandyCarlson said...

That might be some happy breathing despite the challenge of all those thoughts engulfing you! I like this piece very much.

Bungz said...

Lonewolf - Thank you. Take a deep sigh. It helps.

JR - Ha ha. I sometimes feel that way about some posts. It is amazing, eh?

Julie - Ah, the 'curse' indeed! Thanks a ton. It is big for me coming from a writer!

Sandy - Thanks a lot, Sandy. Again, you always encourage me and it means a lot.

SandyCarlson said...

This reminds me of swimming hard.

That Squirrel said...

You sat sighing? And you wonder why people tease you? :p

Bungz said...

Naval Langa - Thank you for dropping by.

Anju - Of course. What do you think? That i sigh only when people are around? Will i ever find some respite from your torments? I think you add to my sigh factor!

Clover said...

i gasp for breath..i sigh... OMG BOONGI!! are you for real??

Bungz said...

Gitu - Yeah. What do you think? Sigh. You just don't get it...

Divia said...

learn from me bungi - to sigh and not be noticed by others!
he he he

Zak said...

sigh!!

SandyCarlson said...

Thanks for stopping by and sharing your thoughts!

Clover said...

iSigh

SandyCarlson said...

Thanks for stopping by, Bungi!

SandyCarlson said...

Thanks for stopping by, Bungi! I hope you are well.

Divia said...

Hey i've started a new blog http://anthonydemellosj.blogspot.com/ the content of the blog is from books written by anthony de mello, im uploading them one by one as they are really good and are not available anymore in book shops and people scarcely read these kind of books so it is my attempt to make bring to light anthony's work to the blogshere.

That Squirrel said...

You've been awfully quiet and ignoring your blog! Write about DisB :p