Thursday, May 21, 2009


Jealousy, like a drop of heavy poison

Grips my heart and drags it down

Through the mud

I try to grab my heart

And squeeze the last drop

Out of it

While i rest

Thinking that I’m rid of the poison

I feel my heart become heavy again

The darkness stains my mind

The claws clutch my conscience

Drop by drop

Little by little

Claw by claw

I will be rid of it

By the power of Him

who can rid me of it


JollyRoger said...

All the best Boongi, will say a prayer for u. J is the start of many other falls.

SandyCarlson said...

Jealousy is a toxic thing. I enjoyed your poem. I have known the feeling!

SandyCarlson said...

I am thinking two things: 1 is that your new profile photo is super; 2 is that I think you might be interested in a book by a man named Jay Kopelman, who tells his story about rescuing a dog from Iraq. He talks about the importance of stories and how they change.

Nancy said...

Thats a good one. It puts words to emotions.

Chriz said...

jealousy -> anger ->murder

cain killed abel cos of it..

yes if HIS spirit abides in us, we will go through the narrow gate

SandyCarlson said...

Thanks for stopping by, Bungi! I appreciate your thoughts.

!! Oxymoron !! said...

Nice poem Bungi, I can almost sense the heaviness. And how aptly said, "like a drop of heavy poison", thats all it takes, to rid you of peace and the other important things in life.