Drowning in a sea of thoughts
Waves crashing
One against another
And new ones forming
Rushing towards my conscious mind
I struggle to resurface
To thrust my head
Through the crashing thoughts
I gasp for breath
I sigh
My friends tease me about the number of times i sigh. I quite didn't know how to explain why i sighed so much. And i didn't intend to write this thing as an explanation. I sat sighing this morning and this is what came out of it. :-)
18 comments:
nice :)
"Drowning in ... conscious mind" well, it describes my state now :|
: ), when i look at my last post, i think it could have been written by you.
Very nice, Bungi. Ah, the "curse" of being a thinker. :-)
That might be some happy breathing despite the challenge of all those thoughts engulfing you! I like this piece very much.
Lonewolf - Thank you. Take a deep sigh. It helps.
JR - Ha ha. I sometimes feel that way about some posts. It is amazing, eh?
Julie - Ah, the 'curse' indeed! Thanks a ton. It is big for me coming from a writer!
Sandy - Thanks a lot, Sandy. Again, you always encourage me and it means a lot.
This reminds me of swimming hard.
You sat sighing? And you wonder why people tease you? :p
Naval Langa - Thank you for dropping by.
Anju - Of course. What do you think? That i sigh only when people are around? Will i ever find some respite from your torments? I think you add to my sigh factor!
i gasp for breath..i sigh... OMG BOONGI!! are you for real??
Gitu - Yeah. What do you think? Sigh. You just don't get it...
learn from me bungi - to sigh and not be noticed by others!
he he he
sigh!!
Thanks for stopping by and sharing your thoughts!
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Thanks for stopping by, Bungi!
Thanks for stopping by, Bungi! I hope you are well.
Hey i've started a new blog http://anthonydemellosj.blogspot.com/ the content of the blog is from books written by anthony de mello, im uploading them one by one as they are really good and are not available anymore in book shops and people scarcely read these kind of books so it is my attempt to make bring to light anthony's work to the blogshere.
You've been awfully quiet and ignoring your blog! Write about DisB :p
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